Jet trail

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  1. anton980

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    Does anyone find it interesting at all?

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    All I did to the photo was touch up the contrast. The area that looks like a seam is not poor photoshopping, it actually is in the photo. If you think I should remove it, please let me know. Thanks!

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    looks a tad out of focus, but I really like the composition and the colors in this one. maybe a slight crop on the right to remove that one stem just barely in frame.
     
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    I shot it through a window screen and that makes it look like the photo is out of focus. Unfortunately I didnt have much time to remove the screen prior to shooting since the jet trail was dissapearing fast :(

    I see what you mean about the cropping, I think it's a good idea, thanks!

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    A true photographer just punchs the screen out then takes the shot, or wipes out the knife and cuts a hole for the lens. :p
     

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