lighthouse at night

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  1. hahastar

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    Took this shot last weekend, any suggestions to improve it?
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    how is that night?

    Your sky looks nice and blue and the grass green. Usually I like good sky but this seems like maybe a tad too much. I like saturated grass but some people might call it fake. Is that the moon up in the top left corner?
     
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    Yeah, that's not very night-like. Now maybe you shot it at night and the exposure was just too long or something, but that is not a night-shot really. Sorry.

    I still like the shot, even though it's a bit too saturated for my liking.
     
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    A bit astro turfish on the grass but great composition and exposure!
     
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    I would crop off some of the sky at the top and some of the grass at the bottom. The colour however is very effective.

    skieur
     
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    Thanks for the suggestion. i will try to crop off some of the sky see how that works out...
     
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    Well its a decent shot! Like the effect, nice to see a light on, no matter the time of day...

    I think u got a bit to much sky, and you definitely need to fix the tilt...

    nice eye pleasing mood shot !
     
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    thanks NEM. I think you are right, it does tilt a little bit, and too much sky...
     

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