Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by hahastar, Jun 14, 2007.
Took this shot last weekend, any suggestions to improve it?
how is that night?
Your sky looks nice and blue and the grass green. Usually I like good sky but this seems like maybe a tad too much. I like saturated grass but some people might call it fake. Is that the moon up in the top left corner?
Yeah, that's not very night-like. Now maybe you shot it at night and the exposure was just too long or something, but that is not a night-shot really. Sorry.
I still like the shot, even though it's a bit too saturated for my liking.
A bit astro turfish on the grass but great composition and exposure!
I would crop off some of the sky at the top and some of the grass at the bottom. The colour however is very effective.
Thanks for the suggestion. i will try to crop off some of the sky see how that works out...
Well its a decent shot! Like the effect, nice to see a light on, no matter the time of day...
I think u got a bit to much sky, and you definitely need to fix the tilt...
nice eye pleasing mood shot !
thanks NEM. I think you are right, it does tilt a little bit, and too much sky...
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