My first sequence.

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  1. ImNick

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    give me your thoughts.

    Smith to Nose manual.

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    nice sequence. i like this. how did you do this? im a noob
     
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    tripod, continuous frame shooting, and photoshop.
     
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    Very nicely done!

    Allan
     
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    :shock:Um, I think you messed up right in the middle? There are two sets of wheels on the middle one. :raisedbrow::scratch:
    Plus, the ramp thing is not aligned properly with it's other half.
     
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    It's a split level type of deal. He's riding the back wheel at first and then the front. Shot looks perfect to me throughout.

    I like it OP :thumbup:
     
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    Oh, I get it. So is the guy in the middle riding both the bikes in both of the pictures. I get it, I'm not sure I worded it right though.
    I thought this was a cloning picture, okay then. :)
     
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    smith (grind)= front peg and back wheel on the ledge.
    nose manual= riding on just the front wheel.
    The sequence is a combination of seven different photos taken all within moments of each other.
    It is two different ledges of different heights.

    just trying to clear things up.

    and thanks guys!
     
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    I'd like it better if the wheels didn't overlap - it would look a bit cleaner overall.

    The split in the ramp does make it look weird - I had to do a double take. It doesn't help that there's a vertical line in that exact spot most of the way up the frame, zstarting with the ramp, then the fence post and then the guy's leg.
     

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