My friend Lucy

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by KatharineAspen, Oct 20, 2007.

  1. KatharineAspen

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    These are the first photos of a person I've ever really taken properly.

    Any feedback is much appreciated :)
     
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    she's really pretty. You seem to capture her personality in these...or at least the personality she wants people to see? lol. First one is my favourite.
     
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    HI these are interesting but watch out for cutting off the fingertips. In a few they are gone but there is a lot of space over her head so if you move the camera down just a little you'll lose the dead space and get the tips in there. :)
     
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    I really like #3.
     
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    The first and the last are my favorites :)
     
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    I like #3
     
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    #3 is my favorite as well
     
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    HI,

    Well I am going to go off on a little tangent here and say number two is my fav. I love that one. Great job on them. How do you do that blurred effect around the edges? My only critique on number two would have been to have eliminated the trucks wheels visible behind the metal fence.
     
  9. KatharineAspen

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    Thanks everyone for your feekback.

    I only realized when you said it about the finger tips and I'll try and watch out for that next time.


    Also the truck wheels didnt seam obvious to me at first either I'll try and edit them out later.

    Thanks :)
     

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