New photos, need critique

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  1. ownageplocks

    ownageplocks TPF Noob!

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    On the first picture the angle is too wide if you ask me. Too much grass and trees. If you zoomed in closer but still kept the building off to the side I think you would have a better picture.

    The second picture, the background is too busy. It's nice that your subject is in focus and off to one side and the rest is out of focus, but the brick mixed with the air conditioner, drain pipe, etc. is detracting from your subject.

    Overall I think both pictures could benefit from some slight color adjustment.
     
  3. Ron Evers

    Ron Evers Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I find it distracting that the verticals in both pictures are not plumb .
     
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    i am in agreeance that the first pic has too much green in it, needs to be closed tighter! i also think the second one needs to be closed tighter to cut out some of the distraction in the background! but this is only my opinion!
     
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    Adorable cottage and yes both need cropping.
     

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