Not quite sure...

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Nytmair, Feb 4, 2004.

  1. Nytmair

    Nytmair TPF Noob!

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    I can't decide if i like this pic or not...i THINK i do...... but what do you think?


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    Gotta agree with you.
     
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    I think I'd like it better if you cropped the top so I can't see the wall(?) in the background. Looks better with just the tiles showing.
     
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    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    hrrrm. hard to say. i would use this image as a background image for something but it seems for it to stand out on its own though it has some cool depth of field to it. i agree with the bug that it prolly needs the wall cropped out.

    to borrow a term from motcon, I would digif**k this image in photoshop, play around with filters, jack up the saturation, contrast or whatever to make it look funky. then its easier to form an opinion ;)
     
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    ksmattfish Now 100% DC - not as cool as I once was, but still

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    There is something here. I like the suggestions to crop the top, although I'd reshoot, rather than crop this image. Also I think that it would be better if the horizontal line were parallel to the bottom, or put at a more dramatic diagonal. Maybe a hint of colored flash or reflected colored light to add some emotion.
     
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    Nytmair TPF Noob!

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    thanks for the replies. unfortunately i can't reshoot this becuase my dad already filled the cracks in since I managed to get these photos while he was running to the store real fast before filling them. i'll look and see if i have any other pics with better angles, but i can't remember...time for class though! :)
     
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    i like it lots as is. :)
     
  8. bogleric

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    for a seam in a tile floor it looks like the flooring is going nicely.

    I must agree the picture doesn't do much, but a nice practice of DOF, etc. Definitely potential for something, just not sure what.


    ps..... I think someone has spanked spanky one too many times...
     

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