Portraits with a girl friend

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Restomage, Sep 28, 2009.

  1. Restomage

    Restomage No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I think they came out pretty nice, I'm just looking for some C&C so I can improve for next time. I'm kind of restricted by my lighting setup (Using the CLS with built-in flash as commander) so I just did some pretty tight shots. Let me know what you guys think!

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  2. scubabear6

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    I like #3 and #4 the best.
     
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    4 and 6 are my favourite..

    6 was good too with the sun hitting the ends of the hair.
     
  4. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Mix in some fill light. In the first two, the un-lit side of her face (and hair) is just too dark.

    Also, it's usually more attractive to shoot people from above, rather than below.
     

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