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  1. mystical_fire1

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    One word-amazing! Being a noob myself who is still learning the ways of photography maybe my comments wont be of much value to you but on checking on the pictures I could not help but to appreciate the person who has taken these pictures. The initiation from gray scale to the color was superb and I loved every bit of it, and you are also beautiful adding charm to the pictures.
     
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    Personally, I love them! Very nice exposures and compositions. Tell him "Well Done".

    Derrick

    My favs are the B&W's. And as a model, I must say that your worldly beauty works well in not only color, but fantastic in Black and White.
     
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    I love the black and white ones. A great series of photos!

    One thing I would recommend is making the aperture a bit wider to make the background less detailed, but otherwise these photos are awesome.
     
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    Overall, a nice series of images. There are a few technical and compositional issues, but nothing major. The thing that stands out is that you don't appear overly comfortable in front of the camera. Your expressions and positions in many of the images seems a little forced. Just relax, and be natural. What I would suggest is find an area with some nice even lighting, and have your boyfriend take pictures of you walking around and being natural.
     
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    That's why I take the pictures...lol.... Here are some pf my boyfriend that I took. http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3074/2590542185_29a8b2554f_o.jpg http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3139/2590540717_dd07587113_o.jpg http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3146/2748077699_0963162bec_o.jpg http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3210/2748077705_2661ef2980_o.jpg
     
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    :thumbup: I'm with you there! Nice work, well done portraits.
     
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    Not bad. I personally liked #4 the best for composition, #8 had the best lighting out of the bunch... just my opinion though.
     

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