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  1. LuisAugusto

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    Pick about 5 tops and embed them, nobody wants to go on there and constantly go back and forth typing.
     
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    Following your advice:

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    And one color shot:

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    They were more than five, please give as much feedback as possible.

    One again, thanks in advance.
     
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    I love the perspective and lines on #3, unusual viewpoint. #5 i like as well, initially drawn to you in the background (i'm assuming its you) then to you at the foreground with the eyes! they just pop out... The last one, i like the simple use of colour but i would have preferred focus on the water rather than just.. anywhere!
     
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    I love the subject in #1, but perhaps a somewhat tighter crop to remove the people on the left. I see you approve of others editing your photos so i hope not to offend anyone with this.

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    I actually think it looked better with the people. My favorite is number 1, it has a beautiful perspective.
     
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    I'm glad you like them, about the first one and the crop, don't worry I don't have any problem with the editing :) Maybe I could make the part with the people darker with the gimp, because yes, they're indeed a distraction.

    The water drops pic, I tried too, but it was hard to judge the depth of field with the viewfinder, and I couldn't check the picture right until I was home because the sun didn't allow me to see the screen correctly, but yes, you're right I focus the wrong part haha.

    Thanks again for your help.
     
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    I like the cropped version of the picture of the child, much better..
    Out of them all I really liked the close up of the person smoking the cigarette (I do not like the other smoking one because it looks too put on & OTT) I can't remember without going back if perhaps it was the same picture cropped in or a completely different close up..
    I scrolled down and saw you didn't choose to add that one to your 5.. lol...
     
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    La primera foto es interesante pero la prefería mas si había del frente. También no tiene suficiente detalle en las sombras. Deberías trabajar mas en su conversión a blanco y negro.

    Me gusta al numero 2 mucho. Tiene mucha agudeza, pero necesita mas en los puntos culminantes.

    No me gustan muchos a los 3, 4 y 5. Sí, son extractos pero he visto estos temas muchas veces.

    Me gusta la foto final el mejor. Tiene el tema mas interesante y extracto. Me gustan a los colores blandos.
     
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    Thanks, and they're 2 completely different close ups.

    I like more the non-cropped child, because I believe it's a more balanced shot, in the crop the trash can seems to break the harmony of the shot, which is the important thing actually. Maybe a different crop :/ Or maybe I'm crazy XD
     
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    i really like 2 and 3...... and for the record, the one with the crop is better, or black out the ppl on the left....
     
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    Es directo de la calidad JPEG de mi Sony A200, tomada en blanco y negro, no es convertida de color a blanco y negro.

    Esta opinión me parece interesante, podrías extenderla un poco más. A tu parecer, qué me falló? Quizás necesitaba más profundidad de campo, no?

    La 3 a mí personalmente me gusta mucho, sin embargo entiendo tu razón para no ser fanático de las 4 y 5, en realidad las tomé por echar relajo en la cocina y baño de mi casa, cuando encontré un flash viejísimo para mi Minolta X-300s que se puede disparar con un botoncito rojo, jajaja.

    Gracias, me alegra que te haya gustado, personalmente los tonos naranjas me encantan.

    De nuevo gracias por los comentarios.

    PD: La palabra que creo buscabas era Abstracto en vez de Extracto, sin embargo, te felicito tienes un buen español totalmente comprensible.
     

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