Resubmited In Sepia

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  1. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    Hope you guys like this better. i also added a bit of difuse glow

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    this one was cropped

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  2. Alison

    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! I love that first one. The colors are just right and the softness from the glow really compliments the photo. Excellent work!
     
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    very good remake! :thumbsup:

    on the side, i think it would be cool to pursue the "rusty blue" color/texture combination that was in the original. it's an unlikely combination, maybe try making something else out of it.
     
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    First one, the other one is cropped too much.

    Great job.
     
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    Thanks guys!
     
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    Yep. I'm really liking that first one. An awesome shot, really.
     
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    Awesome! It has a whole lot of its own impact in sepia!
     
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    woooohoooo for the first one!
    awesome! :shock:
     
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    ya- in your first post, i suggested the second crop. i was wrong- that cropline kills the three-dimensionality; the original is much better.
    you have definitely improved it with the newest tweaks.
    nice job
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    I like that a lot. It really makes the mood of the pictures.
     
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    Very nice, much better! I like the first one (uncropped) the best. Your color treatment and glow makes it so perfect!
     

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