Rose (not same as in General Critical Analysis thread)

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Trenton Romulox, Dec 11, 2007.

  1. Trenton Romulox

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    Just want to see how people feel about this shot...thanks for looking!

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    i dont like the bit thats illuminated at the bottom..
     
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    if you moved the light to the right a tad, and maybe if it was a touch brither...it would be a lot better...
    but I do like it.
    It looks to me like the white balance is a bit off, and that would fix the picture for me I think.
     
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    ditto on Sideburns post... move the light that way>>>>
     
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    Better? Worse? What do you think about this edit...
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    definitely bigger, but I was thinking the light source onto the flower. Not just hitting the left side. It is a great shot btw, this is just my opinion. I don't dislike it because of the original lighting by any means.
     
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    i like the first, i'd hang it in my home
     
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    Good pictures - although the edit does it more for me.

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    I do like these kind of shots and there would seem to be a number of ways in which it could be lit and still got a successful result. The only thing that puts me off is the quantity of water on it - it seems just a bit too much to me. What's happened is that the petals have gone translucent and it doesn't look quite rose like.
     

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