Rusted Fence

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  1. Sk8man

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    this fence piece is rusted with the help of the mideterenian sea...
    hope you like it :)

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  2. Nytmair

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    i'm finding the border to be pretty distracting...
     
  3. Rob A

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    yeh me to, but the image is good.
     
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    nice composition. the fence is pointing toward the upper right corner where there are some reflection. i can't help but wonder if theres more to be seen there, is there? could you have include more?
     
  5. Artemis

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    Nice...im debating whether I like the border or not, but that may be cause to distraction so ill have to agree with Nytmair on this one.
    Good image, but a feeling of emptyness, maybe you could have filled it up more.

    Or perhaps a nice conversation to B and W may be in order?
     
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    Add oil !!!
     

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