Studio portraits

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  1. photographedmemories

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    I'd really like some honest feedback on these photos. Thanks!

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    Cute, kinda remind me or pin ups a little
     
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    I think it was a good job. I think the lighting may be a little too harsh. In the first, the colors are great where the light is blocked a little and the second seems just a bit blown out. I have no experience with portraits, so, like I said, NICE JOB!! I just set up a studio and I'm shooting later this week, so we'll see what happens! Keep up the good work!
     
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    the first one has way too much head room, i'd like a tighter frame, imo. 2 looks like she's standing in nothing smack dab in the middle of the frame. maybe change that up idk
     
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    i like them also... maybe a little to hot on the left for the first one?

    did you do any pping on them? the colors are really nice :)
     
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    Yes, I did do minor pp on them, just a little extra contrast but not much at all. Thanks. :)
     
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    Actually, the first photo was shot in complete natural lighting, just some very minor pping to up the contrast slightly. Maybe I added too much?
    Thanks for the comment.
     
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    I'll take note of that. Thanks.
     
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    Thanks. That's actually a great compliment, seeing as I plan to use this model for some future pinup style photos.
     

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