the practise (c&c plz)

[basic jammer]

so i decided to take a colleague of mine to the back of the hotel we work.... wot hink you fellas


1#

2#

3#

absolutely no PP done. feel free to edit as u see fit. and not only tell me what is wrong but what to correct next time. thanx

 

[basic jammer]

 

[basic jammer]

that bad huh? thanx @everyone

 

[MyaLover]

#2 looks like you caught a perv in the bushes.

#3 is the best out of them. But you do have some lighting issues in all of them. The natural lighting in third looks like it would be very pretty. Try taking some with natural light, then slowly add artificial lights (flash). Play around with the settings. The more you experiment, the more you learn and the more you will develop your style

 

[basic jammer]

here's the family in natural light
#1

#2 this is the tent

#3 in the tent.. with flash

#4 without flash

#5 B/W with flash

the most difficult condition i've ever had to photograph. damn