Through the Bridge

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  1. ipon

    ipon TPF Noob!

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    How can I improve these shots, and which is better than the other?
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    Thank you for your opinions..
     
  2. Smith2688

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    I think they'd be better if you could see the skyline. I personally don't like that bridge part in the way.
     
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    I like the lines in it, but they're distracting (i think). What are you trying to show in this photo? It doesn't really make much sense. Are you on the bridge itself?
     
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    The first one looks better. But there is that red skyscaper and you can tell it's being hidden behind the bridge. You should either entirely incorporate it into the shot or hide it entirely
     

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