I'm a beginner with photography and editing, but trying really hard to improve. The problem is, on top of improving my technical skills, I also need to develop my eye to see what still needs to be changed -- something that can't really be taught through tutorials and YouTube videos, etc., but something I think I can only learn by someone critiquing my work and telling me how I can make it better. I took these shots of my kids this afternoon and edited them in Photoshop. Would love input on how I could have done things differently (in shooting or in editing), or any guidance on how I can improve! Teach me, please!