Wonka candy Nerds!

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  1. photong

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    I'm still kind of working on it.

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    It needs to be smoothed out a little bit. And it's missing something. or something just isnt right and I cant find it exactly (its hard when you make an image). Could be the negative space, or font (placement and size). Maybe I can try adding the Wonka cartoon guy?

    Update: Here is Wonka to show what he looks like. He's fuzzy because I had to scale him to make him larger :( if there's another way, I would REALLY love to know :) It does feel better having him, however, what about the bottom? I'm thinking of making the word Nerds larger to help fill the space. Plus, one of the Nerds packaging has a oval thing behind the words. I'm thinking of doing this for the box. But it might be too much.

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    I really love the idea.... I agree that the picture is missing something.... but I just can't figure out what it is.... hmmmmm.....

    I'll be thinking about it :D



    btw you're beautiful :wink:
     
  3. photong

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    Thanks! Did you see the updated image with the Wonka guy?

    I hope you have more attention left in you to pass out to the other girls or else I'll never get any reputation points from them ;D Thank you :)
     
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    mmmm nerds! ;)

    I like the top one. Its clean and simple. I like that. I don't think its missing anything. Although I think "wonka" is tilted a bit too much. I think making the words larger might help fill out that space too.

    If you can find a crisp graphic of wonka, try putting him in. If not... leave him out.
     
  5. photong

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    I thought those too, Loopy. Same with the word Nerds. Except with the word Wonka I'm too lazy tonight to also move the hat I had to colour in lol I will tomorrow. But I already definatly cleaned up the dust a little and smoothed it out. Only a print will tell me if I did a good job or not. As for the Wonka logo. I like him a lot. I hope I find a crispier one. Thank you Loopy :)
     
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    I think it's cool how you got the candy's reflection in the box lid. Nice!
     
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    ITs really cool but you should put like a er..whats it called...you know..o a SLOGAN yea!
     
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    I like the first one the best... plain and simple, but the colors work great! :)
     
  10. photong

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    Great minds think a like. I realized it lastnight. it'll help fill the space. I already have it too. :)

    You should see the bright purple pinky colour I had shot it on lamo
     
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    oh, I just noticed something photong....
    Around the curved edges it's not cut out very well...

    Also, I was thinking it would be cool if the background(between the two colors) was a curved line instead of a strait line.... A very slight wave to it....maybe...

    I don't really know... maybe there is too much background.... I'm just talking though... haha :albino: <<<<<me... :confused:
     
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    if you still feel that it looks to plain, why not try and texturize the background a bit at a low opacity.
     

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