08 Technical assignment #2 Frozen water

[KVB1085]

i really need some critiquing on these two... both are shots of a small trickle of water streaming down some rocks... in the first one it seems very focused on the water, but everything else is blurred.... second one, i think my shutter speed was a bit too slow... idk can someone help me out?

 

[Big Bully]

I would say that the second picture is definately the better picture. You can actually tell what the subject is. And even with the slow shutter speed it fulfilled the assignment very nicely. I really like the colors and how the water splatters in the second photo. You did a very good job.

 

[KVB1085]

I would say that the second picture is definately the better picture. You can actually tell what the subject is. And even with the slow shutter speed it fulfilled the assignment very nicely. I really like the colors and how the water splatters in the second photo. You did a very good job.

thank you...

honestly though, i don't much care for either picture...
the first one, you're right you can't tell anything with exception of the splattering water. and the second one.. idk just seems like there should be more too it... it's like i need a "bigger picture" to get the "whole picture" but an further away and you couldn't see the assignment...

but again thanks for you critique!

 

[Big Bully]

thank you...

honestly though, i don't much care for either picture...
the first one, you're right you can't tell anything with exception of the splattering water. and the second one.. idk just seems like there should be more too it... it's like i need a "bigger picture" to get the "whole picture" but an further away and you couldn't see the assignment...

but again thanks for you critique!

You are welcome.

 

[photofox]

Since the due date has passed, I hope it is OK to post a shot from a series I made a while ago. They were a challenge at the time, trying to figure out a technique that produced something a bit different. (I called this one "Liquid Love")

 

[Big Bully]

Of course it is ok to post pics even though the date has passed. As stated before, the only reason for the date is, to say when the next assignment will be posted.

 

[Dioboleque]

 

[JerryPH]

Late, but better late than never:

 

[SamGuss]

One of the coolest photo's I've seen. Excellent detail.

Sam

Big thanks to sabbath999 and hawkeye for showing me what my camera can do! I hit the shower to test it and here is the result:

 

[petey]

nice

 

[Rolland]

Ice Water

 

[Eupfhoria]

Since this thread seems to still be going, I took this shot at the beach.

 

[bikefreax]

I know it's late

but here was my shot.

 

[Wozza]

Two more Another fountain in town. Also check the other water thread for a slower vers.

 

[Big Bully]

Fantastic Wozza!! I love them they look great!