Well, I shot it as I found itIt's pretty interesting, the angle of it sort of distracts from the subject for me though.
This is a great piece of advice, thanks!Also, seeing as the edges are quite light, I think it would benefit from a dark border to really "close" the edges off and keep the picture a solid unit.
I like the edited one better, it has more contrast.
Thanks guys. I have the nagging feeling that the new version is either too sharp or too contrasty or both.I like both but--there's one in every crowd--I like the original better. Good work.