I think you have great subject matter, but I'm not sure how well it translates to your viewers. I, personally, would personally rather see the whole truck with the overgrown brush/trees around it. I do like the look of the first with the writing, but aside from the door handle, it's hard to tell it's actually a truck. The second might be stronger if the items back in the darkness were more out of sight and less distracting.
Do you have any more shots of this?