1st time with real model ....c&c

[henryalg01]

This my 1st time hired to shoot real model , location Water Blow Nusa Dua Bali.

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[Flyhigh]

Not a critique, but #1 is my favorite by far.

 

[2WheelPhoto]

It appears some fill light would enhance all of them. #2 is nuclear blown out bright. #1 and #3 the subject doesn't fill enough of the frame. Is she or her modeling agency happy paying for these?

 

[henryalg01]

No ...my friend hired me , and the agency hired him , he need a team so i'm in . I gave these 3 photos to him and let him to decide , but photos still mine , i told him i am a newbie and he knew too, but he said "you will never become an expert if you never try" he is pro ... Maybe he doesn't care my photos but i do , that's why i posted here.

 

[henryalg01]

The manager said he need to expose the water blow...btw thx for you c&c

tried to crop...

 

[Corvphotography]

i think if she is the main subject then id would def fill her into the frame alot more. I like the cropping you did better, keep it up

 

[tirediron]

The general concepts are good, but as mentioned, the exposure leaves a LOT to be desired. You needed light. A LOT more light to make these work properly.

 

[651stp]

#3 misfocused also

 

[gsgary]

The model looks wooden