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er111a

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thoughts?
 
both are a little overeposed.
 
They dont do anything to me.
 
It took me a while to realize that was a mailbox in the first photo. Even after that, the first photo is missing something... can't explain it but basically it needs a stronger point of interest.

The second one makes me think of an old picture/painting from the turn of the century (the last one not 2000). It seems nice but again I just feel it needs something to make it more interesting.

Just MHO, though.
 
They seem a little flat. I can see that you're trying to make something out of 'em, but they aren't quite making the leap. I'd give some tips, but I'm a beginner too. Keep at it, I feel like you're getting somewhere. :)
 
"Snail Mail" comes to mind on the first image.
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Shoot well and thanks for sharing, Joe
 
the first one took me a while until i realized there was something in the ground and even then, i didn't know what it was, only able to vaguely make out the text.

the second is VERY bland.. and the bit of tree on the right doesn't help
 

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