2 Portraits for C&C.

jwbryson1 · Dec 30, 2011

1. My older brother and his son:

[/URL] Scott Benjamin-1 by jwbryson1, on Flickr[/IMG]

2. My daughter at X-mas:

[/URL] Taylor Tree Smiles-1 by jwbryson1, on Flickr[/IMG]

jwbryson1 · Dec 30, 2011

paigew · Dec 30, 2011

Hey! I don't really feel comfortable offering c&c since my photos aren't the best. But since you bumped.

1) . Jorts :er: (well even if there shorts I still don't think shorts look good when seated like that...you can see up them) . Shoes cut off. Something about his angle towards the camera doesn't seem right to me, maybe someone more experienced can give some tips.

2) I think this is a cute photo! To be picky maybe have legs down, or both up/in view

arturroz · Dec 30, 2011

1. I try to be careful as to where I cut limbs. So what the toes. Also, it looks like the man was given the baby as a prop. If they're related, I would have like to see a bit more interaction.
2. Is nice, a bit over exposed. What I like to do with strobes is to use them so that it doesn't look like I used flash.

Good work.....keep it up.