2nd photoshoot

[Bogs]

After spending hours of drooling over glossy pictures in fashion magazines i decided it was time to do another shoot. i feel like i ve gotten better since last time but i'd appreciate a fresh look at these along with some destructive critique

 

[jfrabat]

I like them, especially the first one... On the second, there is a shadow on the arm that bothers me a bit, but its not a bad shot.

 

[imagemaker46]

I think they both work.

 

[luvmyfamily]

I love the composition of #1, maybe it's just me, but she looks a tad out of focus. #2 seems a tad overexposed, but overall, good job

 

[paigew]

With #2 I would have tried to get the entire tie in the shot. It actually took me a minute to figure out what that was...I thought it was some sort of stick or something

 

[Bogs]

hers another one... a lot of post processing because i overexposed it.. not sure if i should even keep this

 

[DiskoJoe]

#1 - She looks too relaxed here. She is slouching in the chair somewhat. Also the direction of the lighting is odd. The light coming from behind her is causing unpleasant shadows to occur on her chest. I would have flipped the positioning on the legs too and had her pull in the right and stretch out the left. Here the right is blocking the left

#2 - I think this one works a bit better but they both have some hot spots occurring on their faces.

 

[Bogs]

thanks guys