2pics for C&C

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  1. hydkaran420

    hydkaran420 TPF Noob!

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    IMAG0582 by hydkaran420, on Flickr


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    IMAG0583 by hydkaran420, on Flickr


    These 2 photos are basically of the same plant...
    Correct with every aspect that is wrong.
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  2. Jeremy Z

    Jeremy Z No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the first one better. I'd raise the exposure a bit; the bright flowers look just a bit dark.

    In the second photo, it seems like you're trying to single out the one flower, but you're not cropped closely enough, and the background flowers are not blurred enough. The first one, by constrast, looks like it was your intention to show more than one.
     
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    Actually I tried focus the wee creature to left but I couldn't make it.

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    Holy yellow Batman!
     
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    White Balance looks way off to me, but it may just be my monitor...
     
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    i think you have WB a bit off, and exposure needs some cranking too...
     

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