3 More for C&C

CrissAwad

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Ok, this is my third attempt, 2 other were kind of fail.
Tried some long exposure too.

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The pics aren't in a good quality because they were taken from facebook.

C&C welcome. :)
 
For the first and second, you need a higher or lower angle, not car-height-level. IMO, at least, it just looks awkward and you can get a lot more lines higher/lower. The second one kind of demonstrates what I mean, how it's more interesting, but something odd is going on with those lights in the back. Filters/humidity? on the lens could have contributed to this.

As for the third, get closer to the fountain... you can barely tell it's long exposure :( And again, the light thing. ?
The fourth is exposed oddly...
 
facebook? why? and that is 4

I still didn't open an account in any hosting site. I will after i get my D90 next week or so. Flickr proabably.

For the first and second, you need a higher or lower angle, not car-height-level. IMO, at least, it just looks awkward and you can get a lot more lines higher/lower. The second one kind of demonstrates what I mean, how it's more interesting, but something odd is going on with those lights in the back. Filters/humidity? on the lens could have contributed to this.

As for the third, get closer to the fountain... you can barely tell it's long exposure :( And again, the light thing. ?
The fourth is exposed oddly...

Thanks for the comment.
The last pic was slightly edited, here's the original:
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Is it better?

Thanks.
 

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