OP, do you really think the processed version of the above photo is better? The one you just posted is SO much better. Well, better to me, at least. I can actually see the photo for what it is; before I literally could not get past the processing.
That said, I can actually provide some C&C. Overall, it's a nice photo. I'm really digging the side-lighting on the dock posts. I also like the way the dock leads my eyes, but I don't like where it leads them. I feel like there should be more lake space on the left side of the frame. The sky is a bit bright, but there's not much you could have done without a graduated filter. Or processing. (did I really just say that?)
Just my thoughts. Please post more like this.