I agree with this. I really like the subject, composition and B&W conversion in general. I'd try to either shoot this again not including the lit section on the left, or maybe do some creative cropping to this one to reduce the white area on the left to a minimum. Also, I'd try to straighten the image so that the top of the bridge is level.Nice, but my eyes are drawn to the bright spot between the bridges that would seem to be the natural darkest spot