50mm in the wild, with a flash. Thoughts? C&C welcome

[CMfromIL]

I did order a small diffuser box to put over the flash head. I hope to have that next week. Thanks for all the comments so far, really appreciate them.

 

[rokvi]

OP, your daughters are beautiful... you have some keepers here.

The keepers are the daughters or the photo's? lol

Sorry I had too.

 

[Rosy]

Here is my 'favorite' pic, with the clarity redone, spot fixed a few blemishes and adjusted the wb for 'flash'. And the DOF was too shallow. Guess I have to go try again.

Your daughters are absolutely beautiful