A few B&W's from Recent Trip

[Ocho_1]

DSC_0054.jpg by ~Ocho1~, on Flickr

Sorrows by ~Ocho1~, on Flickr

DSC_0542.jpg by ~Ocho1~, on Flickr

 

[timor]

Looks like you didn't have good light there. None of this really work for me mostly because of composition. In #1 there is too much oof areas and the single post you wanted to show drowns in the flood of it plus strong lines behind it are distracting. In such a shots you should pay attention to BG. #2 is too wide, subject is too distant, too much distractions, you didn't isolated subject from them. Plus this hand over the face, there is no bound between the human and the bird. #3 is unclear, what you want to show, honestly it's a mess, no story at all. Plus pic, thanks to low light, is low contrast and a bit muddy. Sorry about Thais few maybe harsh words, but this is, what I think. Pictures, especially street pictures, should have some strong point of interest, tell some story. Keep shooting, but try to see the picture, before you release shutter and you will have more success. For sure.

 

[Ocho_1]

ok, thanks