A few from today C&C Please

lucas123 · Nov 13, 2009

C&C Please thanks

#1

#2

#3

Stormchase · Nov 13, 2009

Hmm I like them. The first looks like he I comming in for a hug. Kinda moving. Second one I like the little red nose! Really makes it for me and the background is great. I think three captures what's going on in q kids mind well. Tho the light on the top of his head is distracting they are all good in my eyes.
I am a rookie and I'm sure you will get better cc on them.

lucas123 · Nov 13, 2009

thanks i am just starting out with this and I was thinking this was one of my best days out so far but still have a long way to go yet

caroldeandaphoto · Nov 13, 2009

Cute kids,
#1 seems just like a snapshot to me...When your outside try not using flash....
open shade is the most gorgeous light and in my opinion does not need flash...shoting at a lower aperature....f/3.5 maybe?

#2
This one is my favorite...composistion is nice...But it is a little underexposed and her eyes are quite dark...would you be ok with me giving this one a quick edit and putting it back on here?

#3 the light is super distracting....blown out and his eyes are in the dark...

Overall though keep going in the direction of #2 ;-)