a few i took

[amartin]

i think for the most part they turned out ok. what do you guys think
#1

jordan2 by amartin1955, on Flickr
#2

jordan 2 by amartin1955, on Flickr
#3

jordan by amartin1955, on Flickr

 

[rlemert]

The only problem I have is with her eye shadow. It makes it look like she's looking down. This is especially pronounced in the first picture.

 

[jjparson]

The white balance looks off to me. The three is the strongest in my mind. She has a nice expression on her face.

 

[MLeeK]

1 and 3 need to be cropped in much closer. What is in front of her on the tree stump? She's a bit underexposed in the first. Third's exposure is pretty beautiful with a nice contrast to it.
2 has major clutter and distraction images. Seems a bit flat and slightly underexposed.

The posing and focus on all looks great great. White balance seems to be rather cool in the first two.

 

[amartin]

rlemert

ya i tell her all the time to much makeup!!!
jjparsoni have to work on the white balance not sure how that works yet
MLeeK
i will try to crop 1 and 3. there was a mushroom growing on top of the tree stump should have removed it before i took the picture. underexposed can this be fixed with lightroom? this is still all new to me learn as i go.
thanks for all your reply's

 

[amartin]

croped of # 3 i like it thanks MLeek !!!

backyard16 (1 of 1) copy by amartin1955, on Flickr

 

[Jaemie]

I think #3 is the best. In addition to the aforementioned issues, there is a tree coming out of her head.

She's a beautiful model. :blushing: