A few more "15" photos for c&c, thanks again!

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  1. LuckySe7en

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    Here are a few more from that quince shoot. Any comments or feedback is greatly appreciated!
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    #1 the front of dress is burnt out as well as her chest. But may be my crappy laptop monitor?

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    Good luck!
     
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    I see what you mean about the dress and her chest. This is why I post for feedback ;)

    I appreciate the feedback but I don't need comments about her weight. Thanks
     
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    Any other poses? I would like to see some variety!
     
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    I bet you can guess where my biggest area of opportunity is, huh
     
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    any other thoughts on these?
     
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    The smile in #2 looks forced.
    Why not crop #3 to 4 x 5, perhaps pull back some on that vignetting and watch that blanched spot on her shoulder

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    I like the last one. Thanks.
     
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    thanks guys. Trav- I was trying to get some creative lines out of the cement floor which is why I loosened the crop. Not that I look at it again, I don't like the vignette and the softening.
     
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    I like these better than I liked the last set. I really like how you framed her in the first one, just a little bright, need my sunglasses ;)

    I don't think the smile looks forced in the second one but I agree that I don't like the vignetting in #3.

    Much better!
     
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    It could be a little forced lol I was on the 2nd floor of the capital (very high 2nd floor) and I was manually focusing lol she was pretty patient
     

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