A few more "15" photos for c&c, thanks again!

[LuckySe7en]

Here are a few more from that quince shoot. Any comments or feedback is greatly appreciated!
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[slackercruster]

#1 the front of dress is burnt out as well as her chest. But may be my crappy laptop monitor?

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Good luck!

 

[LuckySe7en]

I see what you mean about the dress and her chest. This is why I post for feedback

I appreciate the feedback but I don't need comments about her weight. Thanks

 

[jake337]

Any other poses? I would like to see some variety!

 

[LuckySe7en]

Any other poses? I would like to see some variety!

I bet you can guess where my biggest area of opportunity is, huh

 

[LuckySe7en]

any other thoughts on these?

 

[The_Traveler]

The smile in #2 looks forced.
Why not crop #3 to 4 x 5, perhaps pull back some on that vignetting and watch that blanched spot on her shoulder

 

[mcap1972]

I like the last one. Thanks.

 

[LuckySe7en]

thanks guys. Trav- I was trying to get some creative lines out of the cement floor which is why I loosened the crop. Not that I look at it again, I don't like the vignette and the softening.

 

[KBM1016]

I like these better than I liked the last set. I really like how you framed her in the first one, just a little bright, need my sunglasses

I don't think the smile looks forced in the second one but I agree that I don't like the vignetting in #3.

Much better!

 

[LuckySe7en]

I like these better than I liked the last set. I really like how you framed her in the first one, just a little bright, need my sunglasses

I don't think the smile looks forced in the second one but I agree that I don't like the vignetting in #3.

Much better!

It could be a little forced lol I was on the 2nd floor of the capital (very high 2nd floor) and I was manually focusing lol she was pretty patient