Discussion in 'People Photography' started by LuckySe7en, Mar 28, 2012.
Here are a few more from that quince shoot. Any comments or feedback is greatly appreciated!
#1 the front of dress is burnt out as well as her chest. But may be my crappy laptop monitor?
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I see what you mean about the dress and her chest. This is why I post for feedback
I appreciate the feedback but I don't need comments about her weight. Thanks
Any other poses? I would like to see some variety!
I bet you can guess where my biggest area of opportunity is, huh
any other thoughts on these?
The smile in #2 looks forced.
Why not crop #3 to 4 x 5, perhaps pull back some on that vignetting and watch that blanched spot on her shoulder
I like the last one. Thanks.
thanks guys. Trav- I was trying to get some creative lines out of the cement floor which is why I loosened the crop. Not that I look at it again, I don't like the vignette and the softening.
I like these better than I liked the last set. I really like how you framed her in the first one, just a little bright, need my sunglasses
I don't think the smile looks forced in the second one but I agree that I don't like the vignetting in #3.
It could be a little forced lol I was on the 2nd floor of the capital (very high 2nd floor) and I was manually focusing lol she was pretty patient
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