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Alyssajns24

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Taken yesterday at dusk! She is the same model as the 1700's shoot. Please tell me what you think!! My website has more from this shoot as well as others.
I made the hair, she made the top.

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I personally think it would have looked better if there was more contrast between the subject and the background, she might have looked better against a darker back...

Just a thought...

Awesome subject matter though. Not the kind of thing you see every day.
 
Great composition, really well done!
Minor niggle is that it would have been better with a darker background to the lower portion of the picture in my opinion.
 
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I know the face is blown out but you see that is what i wanted and I actually over exposed this shot by .5 stop and tweeked a little in ps....


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i like this mate! I like it alot. don't worry about 'blowouts' far to many people like to criticise them often when it has no bearing on the photograph!

can't think what i can offer for a critique except that it might have the ever slightest cyan cast - but this adds to overall 'cold effect' of the image, but adjusting it at least on the girl, might make the reds stand out a bit more.

great work, love the creativity here, stuff like this reminds folks why we are photographers :) thanks for sharing
 

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