A Nice, Warm Day in Ohio

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Here is one image from my shoot today. Let me know what you think!

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Thanks for looking.
 

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I like the light accents around the hair. A little fill on her face would have helped bring out her eyes.
 

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Hmm.. ok, I hate to bring it up but.. her right hand could be uh... in a bad place.... Not sure where I would have put it but... not there... other than that.. I love the pose and background and all.
 
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Hah thanks for the input. I will watch out for that next time.
 

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OK ... I did not see the "hand-problem" as clearly, all I saw (and got attracted to) was her backlit hair, which I like a lot here (and everywhere). Her look over her shoulder is nice, too. She is too young and too well in shape to get a double chin from this (while I would have to watch it were I to pose like that :roll: ), but the little fur on her hood prevents that to happen, anyway.

I think I might have placed her further right within the frame, and not so very much in the middle...
 
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Alright thanks, I'm still learning so I appreciate all the comments. And I really didn't see the "hand problem" either.
 

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I like the shot, but like LaFoto said, I also think she should be a little more to the right of the picture
 

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I like the shot, but like LaFoto said, I also think she should be a little more to the right of the picture
To elaborate on that a little, if you have a subject "facing" one direction or the other, it often "works" to have the subject "looking" into the center, with its back closer to the edge of the frame.

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