Great shot but I'm thinking that seeing the rest of the backend of the boat, with the water lapping on deck, may give it a greater meaning of slow death. Just a thought.
I think it's technically just about perfect! Framing, Exposure, Composition, Subject, etc.
It's pretty hard to crit anything about it but if I did it would probably be about the loss of detail in the dark areas of the hull and maybe the question of removing the debris lower-left.