abandoned construction site

[tron]

hey

i took these a few days ago and would really appreciate any feedback you guys have on them. im pretty sure the place was abandoned but i cant be totally sure. all were shot with a nikon d40 with an 18-55 kit lens.

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[Paparoksguitar]

great colors. 1 would be amazing if you had a wider angle and didnt chop of the top.

5 is cool too. i really like 4 as well. The black and white suits it.

 

[Pirate Neilsouth]

1. seems to be suffering from a halo problem and its mainly around the large tower object. However the lead in with the walkway is great , it's just a minor crit

The others are good especially 5 which i really like

 

[tron]

thanks for the comments guys, i agree about the wider angle lens i almost didnt edit that one because it bothered me that the top was cut off (im usually very anal about that kind of thing)

and in regards to the halo, i think that had to do with the levels adjustment layer/sloppy masking on my part

thanks again!