Abandoned Truck (C&C Please

[kdthomas]

 

[jcdeboever]

Nice photo but disturbing in someway.

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[timor]

Honestly ? To complicated. However I like the tones, little warmer will be good.

 

[deeky]

For me, the hotspot is in the wrong place or just too strong. It doesn't make sense to me and becomes distracting. Whether you dodge locally or mask an adjustment layer, I'd be broadening or moving the hotspot.

 

[Derrel]

Nice photo but disturbing in someway.

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Probably due to the nighttime lighting...the wheel well and tire are both absent and detail...that's pretty unusual for a car or truck photo shot from a side angle view, and that's probably what you find disturbing.

 

[jcdeboever]

Nice photo but disturbing in someway.

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Probably due to the nighttime lighting...the wheel well and tire are both absent and detail...that's pretty unusual for a car or truck photo shot from a side angle view, and that's probably what you find disturbing.

I think you hit it right. Got a feeling this may be what the artist intended and if he did, he moved me... Well done.

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[kdthomas]

Nice photo but disturbing in someway.

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Probably due to the nighttime lighting...the wheel well and tire are both absent and detail...that's pretty unusual for a car or truck photo shot from a side angle view, and that's probably what you find disturbing.

I think you hit it right. Got a feeling this may be what the artist intended and if he did, he moved me... Well done.

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Thanks

 

[Benjo255]

I agree with Derrel and the lack of details. I also wish you were closer (with the same focal lens or a wider one).

 

[annamaria]

I like the fact that you can't see the wheels and the feeling the photo gives off.

 

[Didereaux]

It took me awhile, but I think I found the problem, at least as I see it. Look at the background light, then at the light spot on the truck. Best described as unbalanced. I am pretty certain this is as a result of post. Also although I get it it that the OP wanted to put those wheel wells in the shadow it was over done. There is a massive amount of black throwing the whole picture off....no matter the intent.