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kfirg

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hi people!

Here is a picture from my last photographs - The concept was Cleopatra

the bad thing is that the right shoulder is not perfect - sorry for that!

kfir.
 

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The eyes are a tad too dark for my taste. But a really nicely styled portrait! Well done.
 
^^Yep!^^ If you could brighten up the eyes a smidge and pull some detail from the hair this would be stand-out.
 
thank you guys!

here is the new one
 

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Beautiful! Shame about clipping her shoulder off. I'd clean up the skin around her finger nails a bit. I know it's nit picky, but I noticed it immediately.
 
her left shoulder looks a bit weird, try to warp it
 
i tried to fix this...

check this out
 

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hate the smoothing.
 
without :)
 

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Overall great. The only thing that bothers me is the shape of the catchlights.
 

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