Every once in awhile you come across very nice pictures of a very nice looking person. This is one of those times.
2 and 3 maybe improve on the pose a little (less exagerated).
Her makeup is fine and complements the color in her bathing suit, IMO. It also brings out her pretty eyes against her light skin and hair. Nicely done. Love 6 and 7. I like the lighting- single catchlight in the eye in the closeups- shadows are just right although maybe her left eye is a tad dark in #6 (but I'm not convinced of that yet).
4 and 7 are my favorites.
You did a great job on this set!
Shes very stunning and you did a great job working with her beauty and even enhancing it with the make up!
Pro.