Advice please?

[atarvin]

I know I cut off her little hands in this. Any other advice?

 

[imagemaker46]

Eyes don't look like they are sharp, but I don't mind how you composed the shot, and the colour shift works ok with the hay. Losing the hands really does take away from the overall image.

 

[unpopular]

When I see this image, I think "HELP ME! I'M FALLING INTO AN ABYSS OF STRAW!"...

Facial expression is awkward, lens choice and composition add to the discomfort.

 

[KBM1016]

I think I would crop it tighter to get rid of the awkward hand cut off.