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sheis_imaginary · Mar 20, 2012

I've been looking for feedback on pictures, please. Mostly on how I can improve.

Geaux · Mar 20, 2012

Be very careful with your angles. There is not one image where the horizon is straight, not saying its a bad thing, but when overdone it's a negative imo.

Joey_Ricard · Mar 20, 2012

OP, come on, you know the images are nice and Geaux is absolutely right, going crazy with the angles only detracts from the nice images. Maybe in one or 2, but not the entire set. Gorgeous models...nice

DorkSterr · Mar 20, 2012

Agreed with all of the above. The fourth photo is my fave. Nice contrast.

LuckySe7en · Mar 20, 2012

very nice edits. I'll beat the dead horse. angles, angles, angles. They look nice in 2 and 4 but #3 just looks bad. Don't over do the vignetting either. Looks good though

sheis_imaginary · Mar 20, 2012

I'll keep the horizon in mind next time. Thank you, everyone.

Alex_B · Mar 20, 2012

LuckySe7en said:
They look nice in 2 and 4 but #3 just looks bad.

I'd disagree here! ... I like it the most on #3 !

2WheelPhoto · Mar 20, 2012

I like the angles!

WhiskeyTango · Mar 20, 2012

I really like each image as an individual image, but I agree the tipped horizon is overdone. What bothers me more is the white balance shift between some of the shots. The skin tones are changing markedly. Not a problem viewed separately, but viewed together its odd...Really nice stuff though!

slackercruster · Mar 20, 2012

V. Nice. I like the freaky angles.

Keep up the great work and Send in more!

sheis_imaginary · Mar 20, 2012

I've never paid attention to horizon before. I've always liked different angles. But I'm going to focus on horizon more.
I appreciate all the feedback. ☺

tirediron · Mar 20, 2012

sheis_imaginary said:
I've never paid attention to horizon before. I've always liked different angles. But I'm going to focus on horizon more.
I appreciate all the feedback. ☺

Angles can be used to advantage, but are often over-done. IMO, the only one where the angle really works is the one with the young lady leaning against the old truck. In the others, there are obvious vertical elements (treees, balloons) which look visually awkward at an angle, and in the monochrome, the angle is slight enough that it seems accidental rather than intentional.