Well... it's not bad, I like it. But I'd like it more if you hadn't cut the low part of the foregrounds flowers and instead cut the top 10-15% of the frame.
It has a strange look... I'd had bet it had some strange edit.
How about a tighter crop like this? I also applied a curves adjustment to add a little tiny bit more contrast. Specially to darken the green background. But anyway, thought that maybe a tighter crop could save the compositional mistake.
ooooooo.....nice crop on the second. It transforms the image to a different animal altogether...and I like it a lot! I didn't notice that little gem in there! But back to the old comment...I would prefer to see the entire flower for the first image, for sure.