Another "Newborn"

[ababysean]

She was a little over 3 weeks, a bit older then ideal, I would like less then 10 days old, but I am coming along....

Love some cc on these.

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[Derrel]

"id be more worried about your nuts then the lens""

ought to be changed to "I'd be more worried about your nuts than the lens."

 

[Tbini87]

First shot seems overexposed to me. It is just too light I think with the rug and the outfit. Nice idea though, I like them overall.

 

[EmbassyProBooks]

Great ideas, it seems you are on the right track, the second one the lighting seems a bit off, but looking good!

 

[gsgary]

That rug in the first shot is doing you no favours

 

[reznap]

I find the pattern on the top of the frame in #1 to pull attention away from the baby - a little bit anyway.

#2 is a beautiful photo.

Also, grammer-nazi Derrel is right about the sig quote.

First shot seems overexposed to me. It is just too light I think with the rug and the outfit. Nice idea though, I like them overall.

Buzzzzzzzz (as in wrong)

Exposure is perfect on #1.

 

[ababysean]

I like my edits bright, big difference from over exposed, however I do also tend to over expose my photographs, I'm working on that.
If between I would say the 2nd is blown.

 

[reznap]

If between I would say the 2nd is blown.

I wouldn't say it's blown - but I would try to burn in some detail around the chin. The baby's head sort of blends right into the chest area.

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Quick (very subtle) edit showing what I mean:

 

[Tbini87]

I thought 2 was overexposed also, but it looks better with the black imo. The first shot is just too bright overall for my taste. Probably has to do with the rug and baby outfit being so similar in color.

 

[ababysean]

3.

 

[FemFugler]

Ok i'm a noob so take this with a grain of salt.

I like the first one, but with the second one i don't like how the chin blends in to her body. Reznap's edit is a bit better but i would personally want it more defined.

The third picture i also really like.