Another Senior C&C please

[CorrieMichael]

 

[manaheim]

Honestly... not loving it.

The color is a little weird. Her expression isn't very complimentary. The shadow under her nose looks like ... something. Her makeup (not your fault, I know) isn't helping.

I'm not a portrait photographer so take it for what it is, but that's my take.

 

[CorrieMichael]

yikes didn't even notice the thingy under her nose just a shadow.....but I sometimes hate playing around with shadows for fear my light begins to look flat. The tone is a bit different - darker - , not my usual tones.....was trying for a little bit of an urban feel.....

 

[tirediron]

What the wabbit said!

 

[CorrieMichael]

This?

 

[412 Burgh]

This?
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No, such a weird pose for a girl...

 

[CorrieMichael]

This?
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No, such a weird pose for a girl...

lol....okay epic fail.....good thing this is only my second senior shoot and no one had to pay for it lmao