Arizona light rail, cloudy day lake shot,

[35mm4me]

Camera=1960’s Rollei 35-s
Film= Kodak Tri-X 400 black andwhite

 

[LaFoto]

Ah, the good old Rollei35 - makes me all nostalgic.
My immediate thought as to the composition of this photo is that it nags me that the bridge divides the frame you chose (it is cropped wide, apparently) into a top and a bottom half, while I'd much rather see a 1:3/2:3 division. The sky is not so awfully interesting...

 

[35mm4me]

Thanks.
Sky was cloudy just white kind of boring. But I canre crop thanks. Will show re crop….

 

[35mm4me]

Ah, the good old Rollei35 - makes me all nostalgic.
My immediate thought as to the composition of this photo is that it nags me that the bridge divides the frame you chose (it is cropped wide, apparently) into a top and a bottom half, while I'd much rather see a 1:3/2:3 division. The sky is not so awfully interesting...

here is the orig.

 

[35mm4me]

Ah, the good old Rollei35 - makes me all nostalgic.
My immediate thought as to the composition of this photo is that it nags me that the bridge divides the frame you chose (it is cropped wide, apparently) into a top and a bottom half, while I'd much rather see a 1:3/2:3 division. The sky is not so awfully interesting...

Original picture posted.
Better proportion?

 

[LaFoto]

Yes, I think so, even though the sky was not "quite" your friend on that day.

 

[Frequency]

Fine shot indeed