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Great pp. This reminds me of an edgy fashion label, like Caterina Ciuffoletti. You should send her agency a portfolio!
 
I love her makeup and costume. She reminds me of a grilled cheese sandwich. This is just sooooooo fun, whimsical, and silly, and yet...a bit disquieting too. Bravo!
 
I'm really not liking the makeup job; it's splotchy, looks really caked on, and the contour doesn't flatter her face at all in my opinion. Whoever did the makeup should take some more time to learn how to beat a face properly, lol. The black around the eye, the yellow line and green spot are interesting ideas but I think were also poorly executed. Makeup is really important if you are planning to use it, and especially so if it's the focal point of the concept, and unless you want to spend 2 hours fixing 1 makeup job in photoshop, you should really look into who is doing makeup for your shoots, and fire this MUA. The one brown nail kind of bugs me as well.

The exposure looks good, but you could soften some of the midtones around the hot spot on her forehead and under her right eye, and clone out the blemishes that the makeup didn't erase (I see some bumps near her mouth, on her left cheek and above her left eye).
 
Awesome textures. I just wish that the top of her head wasn't cut off, and there was more space below her pinky at the edge of the frame.
 
Just good work. Keep it up. Wish I had the subjects you find.
 
not so much into the makeup and all that one this one. For some reason I really like drawn to the skin tone, hands, her neck. Is that just the lighting or was it done in post?
 
not so much into the makeup and all that one this one. For some reason I really like drawn to the skin tone, hands, her neck. Is that just the lighting or was it done in post?

yes I enhanced the lighting in post to try and make her look that little bit more eccentric :)
 
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