B&W for C&C

[pony]

Was trying to play with B&W conversions a little. Still need lots of work, but would really appreciate some C&C
Thanks so much

 

[Biggs88]

Looks GREAT!

I would have shot a little higher so her arm would have been at the base of the photo. So that the over exposed white blanket would have been gone, and her head would not have been cut.

The lighting is great tho! Care sharing your setup?

 

[tirediron]

Not bad at all; perhaps a touch hot on the face, but not bad at all.

 

[pony]

Looks GREAT!

I would have shot a little higher so her arm would have been at the base of the photo. So that the over exposed white blanket would have been gone, and her head would not have been cut.

The lighting is great tho! Care sharing your setup?

I can recrop for sure, will post it as soon as the rugrats are off me.

Setup is none. On my bed with the blinds open

 

[pony]

Not bad at all; perhaps a touch hot on the face, but not bad at all.

Thanks for the input. I'll try again...that spot was not there in color. I'm still trying to get b&w to not look flat and I guess I played too much :/

 

[pony]

OK, new crop and I tried to get rid of the blown looking spot on the side of her face by not playing with the levels as much...but now I think it looks a little flatter?
Opinions?
Thanks so much

 

[reznap]

^ That crop is a much better framing for her. Also, now there's not so much bright white dead space at the bottom.

Good shot. She's looking INTO the frame, that's usually preferable too.