Berlin

[Denon]

First post here, went on a weekend trip earlier this year. Havn't had the time or energy to do som post-processing on this photos until now.

Hope you will enjoy it, feel free too C&C

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[bobnr32]

There are a couple of spots that need cloning otherwise great shots, apart from 2- there are not enough words to tell the story.

 

[Denon]

Thanks for the respons, I think about that next time.

 

[KenC]

The first is a very nice shot, generally well composed, especially the figure at the end of the platform. I might crop just a little off the bottom and right side, where there is not too much interesting detail; this would also increase the prominence of the figure. There is a little bit of a tilt to the image - don't know if straightening it would improve it or not.

The other three are OK, but nothing special. In the second one I think you needed to include the whole phrase or get closer and concentrate on some details while including only a small part of it. When only a little bit of any subject is omitted, either words or an object, the viewer is likely to feel that something is missing.

 

[Denon]

The first is a very nice shot, generally well composed, especially the figure at the end of the platform. I might crop just a little off the bottom and right side, where there is not too much interesting detail; this would also increase the prominence of the figure. There is a little bit of a tilt to the image - don't know if straightening it would improve it or not.

The other three are OK, but nothing special. In the second one I think you needed to include the whole phrase or get closer and concentrate on some details while including only a small part of it. When only a little bit of any subject is omitted, either words or an object, the viewer is likely to feel that something is missing.

Alright, I will try that and se if I could fine tune the first photo.

And I understand the feedback about the second picture. Otherwise, thanks for great advices and feedback, I will think about it.