I'd like to see the rider's face. An expression of being fatigued would give this some character. Can't be too picky about color, it is what it is. Bubba Watson uses a pink driver. Look past that. I'd do wide shots to show the background, sun set / mtn / bays / etc. I like the low point of view. It doesn't give a good perspective. Maybe if you were low, shot it real wide with the rider coming at you.
I'm not a pro - just giving my opinion.